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Plotting Tips

Another writing tip from Writers Welcome (www.writerswelcome.com)
TRY THIS GREAT PLOTTING TOOL

Lay out the events of the book on SCENE CARDS, something you can add, discard or reshuffle at will.

The first card may be the Ending. Others may include:

The Inciting Incident (sets the plot in motion)

The Prize (What your character wants)

The Strategy (What does your character decide to do to get it?)

The Conflict (Who are the people working against her?)

The Stakes (Consequences if the plan doesn’t work)

The Bleakest Moment (What happens when things look hopeless)

The Lesson (what does your character learn about himself or others?)

The Decision (What does your character do with what he has learned?)

The Back Story (What is haunting your character as the story starts?)

Remember: Events in the plot are causally connected. Not just ODTAA*
*One Damned Thing After Another

13 Mountain Thanks

Thanks to all the folks who signed on for the ride. JR
In this Cold War thriller, CIA operative Jim Gadsden struggles to prove he is not washed up while he works against the clock to save the Pacific Northwest from atomic annihilation. From Singapore to D.C. to Idaho and beyond, Gadsden battles traitors, the elements, and the limits of human endurance with grit and determination. But all the wit and strength in the world may not be enough to protect him from betrayal by elements within the very system he is meant to protect. Written with an insider’s knowledge of Military Intelligence, this updated edition of John R. Reed’s first novel is a wild, unpredictable ride from start to finish.
Read the first chapter on the page above.

Reviewers Appreciated

Feel like crafting a witty, eurdite, insightful, finely-honed review? Thanks. The book is my private eye novel, Shadow White as Stone.(Since you’re a follower of this blog, I bet you caught the Theodore Roethke reference in the title.) You can read the first chapter on the link at the top of the page, then go here for the whole reasonably-priced deal. http://www.amazon.com/Shadow-White-as-Stone-ebook/dp/B00AV2JPLM/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1361374605&sr=1-1&keywords=Shadow+White+as+Stone

Borrowed this from somebody a while ago. Still makes a lot of sense. Food for thought:
LIES UNPUBLISHED WRITERS TELL THEMSELVES

1. THE RULES DON’T APPLY TO ME.

I write amazing first drafts. If there were a contest for first drafts, mine
would win every time. So I told myself, “Writing is not rewriting.” Other
people might have to do multiple drafts, but my first drafts are so solid I
could publish them as-is. For years I believed this.

One day I did three drafts of an article, and it became my first published
article. A solid first draft is not good enough to be published. All those
“rules of writing” that you read in Writer’s Digest, on blogs, and in
creative writings classes are rules because they are true most of the time.
So if there are some rules that you think don’t apply to you, think again.
It might be the rule preventing you from getting published.

2. AGENTS AND EDITORS HAVE IT IN FOR ME.

Ah, those blood-sucking agents and editors. I’m pretty sure they have meetings in a secret underground lair where they talk about how jealous they are of my writing skills and how they should team up to keep me from being published.

This is a lie that is so prevalent among unpublished writers that editors and agents have to go to psychologists so they can feel good about themselves again. I know one editor who calls herself “Dream Crusher” to assuage her pain. Here’s the truth: Editors and agents desperately want you to be good enough. They make a living by writers being publishable. If you’re getting rejected it’s because you still have work to do. either as a writer or as a marketer.

3. I’M NOT A MARKETER, I’M A WRITER!

Which is exactly why you aren’t published yet. You have to do the hard work of writing a spectacular query and proposal. Notice that you have to “write” the query and proposal. You’re not being asked to do an interpretive dance or draft blueprints to a rocket ship. It might not be your style, and it might be hard work, but being a published author is hard work, complete with e-mails you don’t want to answer, deadlines, accounting and marketing!

4. I SHOULD SPEND A LOT OF TIME FANTASIZING OVER WHERE I WILL BE PUBLISHED NOW THAT I’VE WRITTEN TWO CHAPTERS OF MY NOVEL.

It is way more fun to read Writer’s Market over and over—memorizing the publishers and agents—than it is to write your book. And while this is good practice for when your book is ready to shop, if the fantasy-to-writing ratio tips toward fantasy, it’s time to get back to writing. Unless you are writing a fantasy, in which case you are probably fine and keep up the good work.

5. I’M A BETTER WRITER THAN MOST PUBLISHED AUTHORS.

If you’re like me, you love picking up a book from the “Top 10″ rack, flipping it open and cringing at the terrible prose. But this author (who is, keep in mind, a worse writer than you) somehow got a contract, got published and is selling well. I said this most often before I had finished writing the first draft of my first novel. Perhaps it’s just that the “hack writers” out there actually finish their books.

Here’s an exercise: Find a writer online who is published but far inferior to you as a writer. Look at what magazines they are published in. Then write stories or articles to submit to those magazines. This is a guaranteed way to build your writing resume. Unless—they are actually better writers than you, in which case, it’s a good reality check.

These are a few of the lies that I wish someone had confronted me with when I was an unpublished writer. Now, here’s one last truth for you: You can do this. Work hard, keep writing, improve your craft and be persistent. We’re all waiting to read your masterpiece!

Come and join me in the famous Pirate’s Workshop June 8-13.
details and registration here: http://www.sbwriters.com/

Reed’s Thrillers Online

A quick reminder, you can find 13 Mountain here: http://foldedbooks.wordpress.com/2013/01/31/13-mountain/. Three more great thrillers available now in all ebook formats: Shadow White as Stone, Dark Thirty, Kingfisher’s Call Check them out at Amazon or Barnes and Noble. Thanks for your support.

Dialog Tip

Remember the words of the writer, Robert Penn Warren: “The fictional world is purged of the distractions, confusions and accidents of ordinary life.”
Easy to say, not so easy to do. Practice, practice, practice.

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